New To Manwhore's skype coaching program, I would like some advice on text game

Holmes that's not how texting works. Provide context for each girl, background, etc. Otherwise you make us all look like assholes for assuming we can send out the same spam texts to girls every time and call that "game". ;) 

ah derp, will do. So the first girl is one that I fucked at a party I hosted last night. I was supposed to hook up with her friend, but I ended up hooking up with her in my living room after the party because her friend passed out on my bed (lol), and she was the hotter of the two so I am one happy camper. Anyway, I'll include some messages ive sent to her so far, these were sent the next day: 

Me: whatup buttercup. You ready for fourth of july shenanigans
Me: (20 minutes later) planning to burn down gardener court (where my boy is throwing a party).
Her: Fun. 

Thats all we've texted so far. her lack of response doesn't seem good, but let me know what you guys think. 

The other girl is one I met at the party and made out with. I asked her out to go get ice cream in person and got her number. However, I'm not sure how to go from a first text to a meetup smoothly and playfully. Haven't sent her a first text yet. Should I use callback humor and nickname for a first text to get the convo going or just go for the meetup but in a playful way?

Thanks guys, hopefully this is enough background to help. If you need more info, just let me know.

BigBizzle

Those texts were fine keep pushing the awesomeness script and challenge her. She's just being a little shitty, pull her back into your reality.

"get ready to get your butt whooped on the dance floor punk"

As far as first texts for the other girl. Reengagement texts don't need to be callback humor in my opinion they just need to be interesting. I often find myself using movie quotes now lol. Send her I'm very important. I have many leather-bound books and my apartment smells of rich mahogany.

Ps. get your ass on the teleconference bruh several of us are in college and near your area ;)

This is what I sent the other girl. It took me a while to think up, but it's pretty fire:

Me: Whatup buttercup (i love this nickname to death). This is the plan for the fourth, me and you rob an ice cream store and take all the chocolate chip cookie dough, we run away with pounds of it and throw an ice cream party.

Her: Perfect.
Her: can't wait 

BOOM. It did take me a while, with consistent practice being creative and playful, it will come faster. 

BTW she is a cute vietnameese girl who is in the military. I've never been with an asian before this is gonna be fun. 

BigBizzle

Nice!

That's it? How'd it go.

You mean you banged this girl at your house and aren't sending her more intimate texts? Geezez. Treat a girl like a stranger she'll do the same thing back. You stuck your weenus inside her. Treat her as such