Beginner MW textgame

Hey guys, I'm Rythro and for the past days I'm trying too read every topic to improve my textgame. Well, this is my first real text thing after reading this forum.
I met this girl Mondaynight on the streets. We had like a 20 min conversation, and in my opinion it was a fun conversation. We had a great idea to start a Facebook page promoting the following sentence in Holland: 'Spot on'. So yeah, it was kinda funny.
Here is the text script. I had to translate it, because the text conversation was in Dutch. Sorry for my bad translating skills, did my best. I guess I fucked up hard mainly with my last text. So someone any idea to save this girl?

Me: I miss you & wanna see u, but this dumb security guard won’t let me in the zoo. Is there any way u can escape?
She: Hahah it depends, with which animal are you comparing me? (11 hours later)
Me: The wellknown SpotOnpeacock. Then you could immediatley promote our Facebook page with those bright colors. (2 min later)
She: Oohh the SpotOnpeacock, awesome, thanks :p (3 min later)
She: And how is our Facebook page doing? (3 min later)
She: I expect it very soon!:| 
Me: Well hello missy, let me also take some time to enjoy an holiday. Tomorrow I'm going back to work like they do in the Office! How was your Qday? I've sung acapella that shitty Kingssong while I made salto's (H) (2 min later)
She: Noo, those are poor excuses! With 50,5% of the rights I expect you to deliver great performances! :) (8 min later)
She: My Qday was less spectacular haha
She: Mainly slept late really long
She: And relaxed hard ;)
Me: None of it! Our fancy awesomecontract says that we don't have to work on holidays (2 min later)
Me: Sleeping late and relaxing was also the story of my day. I'm doubting if i have to continue my glory in the roaring clubs. Do you have plans tonight or do you call it a night? (1 min later)
She: Well allright then, only this time. Yeah, I call it this night I think. I'm sitting too relaxed on the couch to stand up haha (4 min)
She: What are your brilliant plans for tonight?
Me: Well, let me tell them to you, SpotOnpeacock! I'm going to that memorable party in XYZ, where I hopefully continue in the flouring clubs or I just go to my cozy bed. (3 min later)
She: Haha, that are two extremes :p Is there something fun going on tonight then? (3 min later)
Me: Well, I hear loud music from downtown to my room.
Me: Ok, for the upcoming 5 minutes I'll make you my Whatsapp girlfriend (1 min later)
She: Haha deal (4 min later)
Seh: 5 min are almost over though
Me: Oh no, now we are broken up. It wasn't me, but it was you. Glorious time though (1 min over)
She: Hahah, it should have been gone better! Too bad this ;(  (2 min later)
Me: Yeah, this sounds awkward, but I wanted to propose you with a spontaneous act. Consequentl, the ring is at your home. When can I come to get it? It's just that I don't have an awesome zapdevice to zap quickly in and out your room. (2 min later)
21 hours later, still no response