Critique my resume
I haven't gotten SHIT so far and i'm getting fed up -.-
I know you guys don't know a whole lot about me but are there tips you guys have for me?
Below is a sample of my resume:
Name
Cellular number
Email address
address
Objectives
- Apply my people skills to advance an organization’s vision in a way that is that is personable, rational and resourceful.
Education
· Attended British School of Manila 2007 - 2009
· 2009 - 2011 Encina Preparatory High School graduate
· Currently attending City College and majoring in General Ed.
Experience and duties
- Cashier at Jack In The Box from 09/2011 – 04/2012
My tasks were to quickly and accurately handle money, maintain a friendly environment with costumers and handle their queries.
- Sales associate at G by GUESS from 09/2012 – Currently employed
My tasks are to assist customers in locating what they’re looking for, handle money transactions, and answer phone calls among other tasks.
Notable Skills
· Fluent in French
· Strong social and communication skills
· Proficient in MS Word
· Basic knowledge of MS Excel
Your first step would be making your objective make sense
Yeah that typo is a doozy.
I go in and I'm crisp, clean and my vocals are fucking coming out like music. - Anonymous MW student
- Autismus Terminus Finis (Root Cause/Cure of Autism Epidemic)
- Called Off My Wedding & Other Turn Tail Signs Of The American Male
yh bud, gotta improve your basic english and make it coherent.
an organization's vision being rational, personable and wateva doesn't make sense BUT advancing towards the company's vision of achieving goals, opening up new opportunities and growing from the head of the organization to the bottom sounds like an exciting, and clear vision.
yh bud, gotta improve your basic english and make it coherent.an organization's vision being rational, personable and wateva doesn't make sense BUT advancing towards the company's vision of achieving goals, opening up new opportunities and growing from the head of the organization to the bottom sounds like an exciting, and clear vision.
That's just as abstract.
I go in and I'm crisp, clean and my vocals are fucking coming out like music. - Anonymous MW student
- Autismus Terminus Finis (Root Cause/Cure of Autism Epidemic)
- Called Off My Wedding & Other Turn Tail Signs Of The American Male
Gogo wrote:
yh bud, gotta improve your basic english and make it coherent.an organization's vision being rational, personable and wateva doesn't make sense BUT advancing towards the company's vision of achieving goals, opening up new opportunities and growing from the head of the organization to the bottom sounds like an exciting, and clear vision.
That's just as abstract.
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yh definitely, it's should be specific to the company's interests.
Op what theyre trying to say is that your goal sounds cliche, doesn't set you apart, nor does it specifically explain how/why a company would benefit from you.
Oh boy...
I'll write up a lengthy post on this. I'm pretty good with this stuff and have worked with some of the best resume editors out there and gained a ton of knowlledge from them. My university spent a lot of money to have people on site that basically take your resume and put it on roids.
Ill do this soon.