Critique my shit plz

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Tue, 11/12/2013 - 20:08

SharpieBrah

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11/10/13

Me: Sup jerk! 10:36 PM

Her: What's up!? 11:34 PM

Me: The ceiling! 11:36 PM

11/11/13

Her: Good one 12:55 AM

Me: What you up to now? 10:22 AM

Her: Working 11:44 AM

Me: I'm coming over to pick you up from work right now 12:16 PM

Her: Please do 12:28 PM

Me: Im gonna kidnap you and we're gonna go to Philly 12:32 PM

Her: Lets do it 12:48 PM

Her: Im broke so Your paying everything 12:48 PM - This bitch is crazy

Me: I'll just rob a bank and hold you hostage. With the money I'll get from that heist we'll be set for the rest of our lives 12:50 PM

Her: Good then you can buy me whatever I want 1:07 PM

Me: You gotta get a Catwoman costume tho 1:11 PM

Her: No 1:20 PM

Me: Your a party pooper 1:24 PM

Her: No I'm not 1:38 PM

Me: Let's hang out on wednesday then 1:47 PM

Her: I don't have a car 2:41 PM

Me: I'll pick you up 3:43 PM

11/12/13

Me: Skank 12:45 AM

Her: Nigggaaaa 1:18 AM

Me: Let's do it niggaaaa 10:46 AM

Her: Whatt 11:42 AM

Me: Hang out tomorrowww 11:51 AM

Me: I'll pay for yo broke asss 12:05 PM - Called her a broke ass for trying to make me pay

Her: I work I get out at 5 look I'll take a day off and then we can hang the whole day in Philly 12:29 PM

Please critique my horrible game

Wed, 11/13/2013 - 00:00

Meow

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you really didn't make her

you really didn't make her invest anything into the convo. The transition to asking her on a date was just forced

I'd say just fluff it up a bit more, call her out, talk shit, tease her...the whole im gonna kidnap you shit is the right direction though

Wed, 11/13/2013 - 00:29

Infinity

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I actually thought it was

I actually thought it was pretty decent. Instead of calling her a party pooper there I would've ignored that and skipped to "Let's hang out on wednesday then." Also get more specific about what you're doing. Not just "Hang out." In guy speak, "hang out" means "lets fuck."

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Wed, 11/13/2013 - 01:09

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Well Skank isn't the word I

Well Skank isn't the word I would have used to reengage, but she did respond. She should want to hang out with you after 5 though (maybe not go to philly) but to take a whole day off? I think she's just using that as an excuse. Take it easy on the insults and try to engage her more in the convo, I like the high energy you have going on here but maybe tone it down just a little.

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Wed, 11/13/2013 - 05:08

SharpieBrah

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Thanks guys (and girl?

Thanks guys (and girl? lol).

My non-community buddy said I came in nice and strong and then pussied out.

Insults may seem counterprodcutive but they work for some reason. They are not meant as insults. Just teasing. They get me compliance for some reason.

I'll re-engage in a few days. Any idea how I should go about that?

Wed, 11/13/2013 - 05:42

Infinity

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My all-time favorite to this

My all-time favorite to this day is from my former teacher, Natural Tim...

Me: ur shit

Does it mean "you are shit.' or "It's your shit." ??? Gets a reply EVERY time and puts em right in line.

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Wed, 11/13/2013 - 05:47

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Can you give me some context

Can you give me some context with this girl? I didn't think it was that bad lol

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Wed, 11/13/2013 - 05:59

Infinity

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What do your logistics look

What do your logistics look like if you "hang out" all day in Philly LOL? Do you think that's a wise course?

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Wed, 11/13/2013 - 16:26

SharpieBrah

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Manwhore wrote: Can you give

Manwhore wrote:

Can you give me some context with this girl? I didn't think it was that bad lol

I've known her for a while. Got her number a while back and we made a date I was supposed to go and I flaked on her. She never said anything so I doubt she was even going to go.

She invited me to a party in NYC a month ago or so but I wasn't gonna go that far.

Wed, 11/13/2013 - 16:28

SharpieBrah

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Infinity wrote:What do your

Infinity wrote:

What do your logistics look like if you "hang out" all day in Philly LOL? Do you think that's a wise course?

Ninja please. I would never want to hang out with a girl "all day". 3-5hrs at most is good. I need my own time.

I never said anything about all day tbh. She did.

Thu, 11/14/2013 - 02:07

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I'd go for the whole day

I'd go for the whole day thing and see what happens

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Thu, 11/14/2013 - 04:34

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How would you

How would you re-engage?

Feels like a blow out on the surface. But I don't think it is

Fri, 11/15/2013 - 00:08

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Bump before I re-engage with

Bump before I re-engage with a "strong" opener

Edit: Too late

Fri, 11/15/2013 - 00:38

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Lol you're fine mang just go

Lol you're fine mang just go with it.

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Sat, 11/16/2013 - 04:08

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11/14/13Me: Sup my nigga

11/14/13

Me: Sup my nigga 5:53 PM

Her: Did you snap chat me? 8:25 PM - I did from a new account I had just added her to

11/15/13

Me: sure 11:55 AM

Her: Uhh? 1:33 PM

Me: As good as hanging out with you all day sounds, we dont have to do that. We can just grab a bite or go to D&B for a bit 3:14 PM - Fkin cheeky. Turned it around on her :)

Her: Haha alright when ? 3:35 PM

Me: Saturday or Sunday. What's good for you? 5:21 PM

I think I got this :)