Day two setup

Yo, so this looks like its going through fine, but I was wondering if you guys have any thoughts on having a "cleaner" approach to setup d2's. I tried to cut out most of the fluff talk and get to the meetup faster.

Although this one seems to be working out, I've had a few attempts to meet up drag on forever and sometimes miss out altogether.

Me: Hmmm my call history shows I phoned you last night. I'm sure it was an intellectual chat....
Girl - 19 mins later: It sure was. You were trying to convince me that you were going to die going down McLeod at 50 km/h
Me - 17 mins later: I seem to have survived that scare.
Girl - 55 mins later: Good to hear. But I guess I can't really judge you because of your level of intoxication
Me - 1 hr 56 mins later: No, probably fair to judge. I was gooned.
Me: How was ranchmens for you.?
Girl - 3 mins later: That's usually like all my friends, I'm used to it. It was good, I'm pretty happy if I can line dancing in. How about you?
Me - 17 mins later: No line dancing for me ;) good night tho. I think...
Girl - 46 mins later: Hah maybe one day. You can't remember much?
Me - 2 mins later: The details are a bit fuzzy.

** Called her two days after this for 15 mins and setup a tentative meetup for the weekend***

** As the weekend got closer, I had better things to do and pushed the meetup til after***

I sent some pic of a guy at work who was dying his Movember stache to match his shirt.

Girl - 5 days 5 hrs later: Why would he do that??
Me - 1 hr 2 mins later: Raising money for movemver. First time I saw him it fucked with my head cause he had a red mustache.
Girl - 20 mins later: Naturally red or dyed red?
Me - 7 hrs 48 mins later: Dyed. To match the color shirt he's wearing. Apparently today is pink.
Girl - 5 hrs 46 mins later: That's commitment. Is this guy married?
Me - 1 hr 39 mins later: I'm not sure.... Maybe not after this month? Or maybe she's into the rainbow stache.
Me: Let's grab a drink sometime soon. How's your next week looking? My weekend got real busy.
Girl - 2 hrs 25 mins later: That's just weird. But yeah, for sure. I have a final that's not due until the 14th. But I want to finish it sooner
Me - 3 hrs 49 mins later: Tuesday? I don't miss school at all :)
Girl - 2 hrs 38 mins later: Tuesdays don't work for me, I have to volunteer. How about Wednesday?
Me - 11 hrs 15 mins later: Ha were busy kids. Wednesday works good for me.
Girl - 4 hrs 33 mins later: Shit, I just realized I had a practicum thing I have to attend on Wednesday
Me - 27 mins later: Well you are a busy girl. I'm busy this Sunday and Monday. Let me know if you can do something later on Tuesday or Wednesday.
Girl - 2 hrs 5 mins later: How about Thursday? It's just that I'll be finishing late on those days. Sorry for the late replies, I'm still working on this paper


And after reading this I may have "given away the power" or something along those lines. Feel free to point out if/where that happened and suggestions on how to get it back.

In the meantime, I'm just going to push forward with the d2 setup.