how is my text game overall?

Me: I got 273 bucks :)
Girl - 19 mins later: Luckyass -.- i got 235 ... But my first one i got 321 ;)
Girl: Wait nvm... I got 0.... Ripped check...
Me - 1 min later: Haha have you figured out what your going to do?
Girl: Ya danny said theyre gunna give me a new one -.- but idk when.. Ill find out tomorrow or sunday
Me: Damnn if its sunday what money will you use?
Girl: Haha i dont depend on mcdonalds paychecks... Like i do but i have my own money saved up too :) like 2 grand
Me: Beast! Save up for a car?
Girl - 1 min later: No! Haha the camrys mine but it was supposed to be scholarship money... But i got my classes paid for by some government scholarship. But like its still
Girl: for school too u know? But i use it for whatever else i need
Me - 6 mins later: Yea i get you i pay for some classes but i end up need car parts for my car im working on haha
Girl - 3 mins later: Ya? So the pickups not urs??
Me - 1 min later: Yea it my other car is a project
Girl - 2 mins later: Haha screw the project car, id be keeping all that money to myself!
Me - 1 min later: Girlll! Hold up! Have you seen 21 jump street?
Girl - 1 min later: Haha only parts of it :p just cus of channing tatum ;) my future husband
Me - 1 min later: Have you seen there classic car they take to school? Boo melanie iglesias my future suga momma
Girl - 2 mins later: Ohhhh ya! Does it look like that one? And idk who that is O.O
Me: Yea ha same one! Google her!
Girl - 3 mins later: Finnnee -.- nd really? :o siiickkkkk.... Hey wait! Whos ur friend? Thats having the party?
Me - 3 mins later: My friend isaac! He lives in west but hell have it in brawley
Girl - 5 mins later: Oh alright :D haha what time is it? Nd later just give me the directions :)
Me - 6 mins later: Haha you drink?
Girl - 1 min later: Nah.. Well iv never really tried it O.O
Me - 4 mins later: Mikes hard lemonade! Pretty good
Girl - 1 min later: Ya? What does it have ? Is it like a light alcohol thing? Haha nd just txt me tomorrow or something cus ima knock out! Goodnight :)
Me: Haha yes a its a chicks drink! Ok tired only worked 3 hours! Kk goodnight :)
Girl - 1 min later: Foo i had two finals! I bearly had finished school nd then i had work right after -.- nd school tomorrow morning at 8 so dont give me none of this back t
Girl: alk! Haha night :p
Me: Haha! Will continue this little argument tomorrow k? ;) thats if you can even if u could hang

There's no end goal here you're just "chatting". With text game you want to have that specific goal of meeting up with the girl