MW, thoughts on the written portion of my POF profile?
"Headline: The only guy in the site who can spell
I work in my house (but not in pjiamas), I like to play tennis, watch DVDs and rebel against authorities
I also like to play games against kids because it is easier to win
I like girls with a sense of humor who like to laugh, I don't like serious girls (if you are, don't get in touch and don't replay to my messages)
Don't get message me if you don't take care of your teeth, smile is important to me"
I tried to follow a similar structure that Bravo pua outlined in his online dating video
"Don't get message me if you don't take care of your teeth, smile is important to me"
it should read "don't message me"
I'm translating from another language
It seems really harsh man. Lol
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It seems really harsh man. Lol
Figured you would say that, I dunno, the brazilian pof site is so loaded with dudes being really direct with sex requests and all that I thought I had to stand out by being picky. Maybe I'm just overthinking the whole thing
Just feels reactive at times, you sound like an unhappy, controlling, and bitter dude that never gets what he wants and is just bitching completely closed off and defensive.
I always screen by saying what I want and leting the girl live up to it as oppossed to what I do not want. Other than that it also sounds sort of insincere, like you are not acting the way you actually do in real life.
When you rewrite it, if you are more DTE(down to Earh) I think it shall be fine.