Need advice, complete noobie

Hello guys, im completely new, im 19, started looking into rsd content and so and so. Anyways im pretty scrub atm with girls, i have very minimal experience which im trying to work on. I started talking to this chick through snapchat,

and i just want to get feedback on it so far. She asked to meetup today but it didn't happen and I'd like words of wisdom from others on what went wrong in my texting

HER:   Hello, do you want to get together tomorrow?

ME: *15mins later:    Yeah that'd be nice, im free after 5

HER: *hr later: Sweet :)

ME:  *1.5hrs later: Cool :) the beach was so nice today, it was like lime green and clear and it was so relaxing

HER:  *next day: What beach did you go to? I lived on the beach  before I moved here, Ill miss it

ME:  *6mins later: name of beach, my first time going there. That must have been really fun living by the beach

HER:  *hr 10 mins later: I lived on the beach next to that beach. Small world. Ive had a lot of good times on those beaches

ME:  *2 hrs later: Nice give me a call around 5 when you have time and we can talk. Im stuck at school till then

didnt call, im sure i have a lot to work on, just typing that out now and reading it to myself i didnt like how i went about it, i feel like i shouldve stopped after she said sweet