Need some feedback on an OkCupid profile
Tue, 02/19/2013 - 01:48
Tue, 02/19/2013 - 11:23
#1
I can only give you advice
I can only give you advice based off of what works well for me. With that said..you may find success being a different type of guy but either way here's how I feel.
Your profile is too long. I'd cut out the philosophical bullshit...girls don't want to read your personal monologue. After you've sufficiently attracted them then they will ask your opinions. On the plus side you have some decent banter type shit in there but you don't need so much nonsense in your profile. I have about 1 or 2 truthful things in my profile and everything else is bullshit. It's also about 2 paragraphs long. Actually that's not true..it's 2 lists and a final sentence I stole from Jeffrey Allen.
Put a decent pic of yourself as your main photo..the taco stand or whatever the fuck that is isn't doing you any favors. Find a pic of you looking like a badass to lure the bitches in. I'd remove the pic of you hurling over the boat...I know you're probably fingering some lake tuna but it might give off the wrong impression. If you have a smart phone become more narcissistic and start taking pics of yourself at random in different settings. Not only does it boost your self esteem but also you get some pimp pics. The creepy gym teacher pic is questionable too...it's kind of confusing and not congruent with the frame you want to set. Your frame should be bad boy not flamboyant or clown. There's a line you don't want to cross.
There's other things specifically I'd change but if you follow those two points above those issues will clear up. After that you need to realize your profile will only take you so far. Re engaging women is important online as well as running volume. If you need help with canned shit I've posted plenty of shit on here.
Your profile is too long. I'd cut out the philosophical bullshit...girls don't want to read your personal monologue. After you've sufficiently attracted them then they will ask your opinions. On the plus side you have some decent banter type shit in there but you don't need so much nonsense in your profile. I have about 1 or 2 truthful things in my profile and everything else is bullshit. It's also about 2 paragraphs long. Actually that's not true..it's 2 lists and a final sentence I stole from Jeffrey Allen.
Put a decent pic of yourself as your main photo..the taco stand or whatever the fuck that is isn't doing you any favors. Find a pic of you looking like a badass to lure the bitches in. I'd remove the pic of you hurling over the boat...I know you're probably fingering some lake tuna but it might give off the wrong impression. If you have a smart phone become more narcissistic and start taking pics of yourself at random in different settings. Not only does it boost your self esteem but also you get some pimp pics. The creepy gym teacher pic is questionable too...it's kind of confusing and not congruent with the frame you want to set. Your frame should be bad boy not flamboyant or clown. There's a line you don't want to cross.
There's other things specifically I'd change but if you follow those two points above those issues will clear up. After that you need to realize your profile will only take you so far. Re engaging women is important online as well as running volume. If you need help with canned shit I've posted plenty of shit on here.
Tue, 02/19/2013 - 12:37
#2
Mang what are you aiming for
Mang what are you aiming for here? What do you think a girl will think when she reads your profile? And how does it correlate with "game"?
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