New here, learned a LOT so far, but need help on my online profile
Tue, 02/12/2013 - 04:20
Whats up brosef's, so I have been lurking a lot on here and decided to stop being lazy and actually post now. So first thing circumstances have forced me to stay home and hustle money. I figured I might as well try online gaming. Whats funny is I have done it on and off for the past several years and the better I got at Cold Approach the worse I got at online. Anybody else experience this shit??? Anywho, figured I would post up one of the ridiculous profiles I have and see if I could get some help. Dont be afraid to give it to me rough, I can handle it. Much appreciated bros.
http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=50895669
Im sure some, it not all of my pictures are garbage. The profile is probably waaaay too damn long, but I thought it was hilarious so why not.
http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=50895669
Im sure some, it not all of my pictures are garbage. The profile is probably waaaay too damn long, but I thought it was hilarious so why not.
Tue, 02/12/2013 - 07:33
#1
That story is atrocious. Good
That story is atrocious. Good pictures, except for the overly redneck one with the 3 guys in it.. couldn't tell if you were in that one or not. You should just try to come off a bit more normal, you have a TON of value you explode with in your pics. Some of these dates will just be lay-ups.
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Tue, 02/12/2013 - 08:59
#2
Funny thing is after you said
Funny thing is after you said the sucked balls I was like really???? So I went back and read it and what the fuck! haha I guess thats what way too much caffeine and Metallica does to you.
I immediately changed it, took out the picture and change the username and headline back to what it was, but it still doesn't seem right. I went by the edoc guide you posted up a while ago, I just feel like it needs to be more than what he suggests.
I went for more of a " relaxed chill guy " vibe to it. I just dont really know how to add more depth to it.
I suck with words though and is definitely why I am here. My game in real life is mostly sub communications, kino and leading. Once it comes to words, my game blows.
I immediately changed it, took out the picture and change the username and headline back to what it was, but it still doesn't seem right. I went by the edoc guide you posted up a while ago, I just feel like it needs to be more than what he suggests.
I went for more of a " relaxed chill guy " vibe to it. I just dont really know how to add more depth to it.
I suck with words though and is definitely why I am here. My game in real life is mostly sub communications, kino and leading. Once it comes to words, my game blows.
Tue, 02/12/2013 - 11:42
#3
Shirtless pics are hawt.. not
Shirtless pics are hawt.. not sure if that line's going to work against you or not. You're exposing yourself as not being "secret society". Every girl knows shirtless pics are hawt, pff, it's just a lie they tell the world to protect themselves from posers.
I would cut out "I like to meet new people!" stuff. It just sounds so gay, or overly-friendly, which is not sexy to girls either. Overly-friendly generally means not having any boundaries, or being so approval-seeking that they need everyone to like them. Not cool.
I would cut out "I like to meet new people!" stuff. It just sounds so gay, or overly-friendly, which is not sexy to girls either. Overly-friendly generally means not having any boundaries, or being so approval-seeking that they need everyone to like them. Not cool.
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I go in and I'm crisp, clean and my vocals are fucking coming out like music. - Anonymous MW student
- Autismus Terminus Finis (Root Cause/Cure of Autism Epidemic)
- Called Off My Wedding & Other Turn Tail Signs Of The American Male
Tue, 02/12/2013 - 11:43
#4
I would keep the last two
I would keep the last two paragraphs and that's it.
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I go in and I'm crisp, clean and my vocals are fucking coming out like music. - Anonymous MW student
- Autismus Terminus Finis (Root Cause/Cure of Autism Epidemic)
- Called Off My Wedding & Other Turn Tail Signs Of The American Male