Reengaging cuties...
Fri, 09/28/2012 - 15:16
Alright dudes!!! I have been working on my texting a lot recently. Im doing manwhore coaching as well so he gives me advices...
Julia: gorgeous Russian girl. She is a model, looking for an agency to work with. We had an instant date but she disappeared afterwards. Planning to text;
Me: Girl, dont worry about these lame modelling agencies. Just found a lottery ticket, probably I will win. Then i will open an agency just for u.in return just give me half of ur income ;)
Astrid:interesting coincidence she is a model as well, from sweden. We had an instant date but she disappeared afterwards. She told me that she goes to clubs with fake id so planning to text her;
Me: when we party, u dont need a fake id. All bouncers scared of me. Have u seen my biceps??
Im looking for ur feedbacks before i text to these girls
Julia: gorgeous Russian girl. She is a model, looking for an agency to work with. We had an instant date but she disappeared afterwards. Planning to text;
Me: Girl, dont worry about these lame modelling agencies. Just found a lottery ticket, probably I will win. Then i will open an agency just for u.in return just give me half of ur income ;)
Astrid:interesting coincidence she is a model as well, from sweden. We had an instant date but she disappeared afterwards. She told me that she goes to clubs with fake id so planning to text her;
Me: when we party, u dont need a fake id. All bouncers scared of me. Have u seen my biceps??
Im looking for ur feedbacks before i text to these girls
Fri, 09/28/2012 - 18:48
#1
Re: Reengaging cuties...
@hkmt:
I think those are both decent texts mang. Hit them up! Your language is a tiny bit awkward but it's not that big a deal. But spell out words correctly. Don't say "u" say "you" and "your".
I think those are both decent texts mang. Hit them up! Your language is a tiny bit awkward but it's not that big a deal. But spell out words correctly. Don't say "u" say "you" and "your".
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Sat, 09/29/2012 - 01:50
#2
Re: Reengaging cuties...
@Manwhore:
Manwhore what do you mean by awkward language? Tell me what this is so that I can work on it as well. The better it gets, higher change I will have ;)
Btw I wrote u and urs to make texts shorter but I will be careful next time...
Manwhore what do you mean by awkward language? Tell me what this is so that I can work on it as well. The better it gets, higher change I will have ;)
Btw I wrote u and urs to make texts shorter but I will be careful next time...
Sat, 09/29/2012 - 01:54
#3
Re: Reengaging cuties...
@hkmt:
probably I will win = I will probably win
All bouncers scared of me can be written better.
When we party you won't need a fake id. All those bouncers are scared of me. Have you seen my biceps?
Just an example. It's basically the fact english is your 2nd language ;) Or 4th? lol
probably I will win = I will probably win
All bouncers scared of me can be written better.
When we party you won't need a fake id. All those bouncers are scared of me. Have you seen my biceps?
Just an example. It's basically the fact english is your 2nd language ;) Or 4th? lol
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