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Really.

Really.

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What are you trying to do

What are you trying to do here? Who is this being shown to?

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Retarded kids. 

Retarded kids. 

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What's wrong with the intro

What's wrong with the intro you used for the sexting video I really liked that one. 

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Well yeah but it's about

Well yeah but it's about sexting nothing else lol 

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lol yah...I guess so

lol yah...I guess so

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Definitley more refined,

Definitley more refined, music choice works much better, although you could use classical lmao ;)

The font is WAY better than the first one, however it looks like a preset from microsoft word...you can use the same color just switch it up to something more high end.

The only thing that comes off abit amateur is the flashing time stamps, I can't even think of a possible alternative to put over the footage BUT something is just slightly off about it. 

Overall though way better than the first one. You could use it but I think you could do one better,

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Niv Mizzle wrote: The only

Niv Mizzle wrote:
The only thing that comes off abit amateur is the flashing time stamps, I can't even think of a possible alternative to put over the footage BUT something is just slightly off about it.

Personally I felt the disjointed numbers to be jarring;

2007

2008

2010

2012

2013

2017

Wtf?

Is that some sort of math puzzle I'm supposed to solve?

As people who actually follow manwhore, I think we all get it, that's annoting the footage from various conferences and otherwise, but as an "intro" to new people I think it's just confusing.

I'd rather still see the footage in that order, to show progression and consistency but see somethign like

"Since 2007"

And then

"10 years teaching"

And then

"Till now"

And maybe even have some crazy makeout or something at the "Till now" at the end for emotional impact.

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^ 'k great I'll work with

^ 'k great I'll work with that. 

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100% agreed

100% agree with Merv

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