Mani party girl
Fri, 04/27/2012 - 23:36
I was thinking of opening this girl over text with: hey party girl, I saw a guy going up the escalator like he's in a captain Morgan commercial.
(we met in the mall)
Sound good?
She said she doesn't party even though she's going to a party tonight. I told her I don't drink lol.
(we met in the mall)
Sound good?
She said she doesn't party even though she's going to a party tonight. I told her I don't drink lol.
Sat, 04/28/2012 - 06:31
#1
Fuck it I sent it. I guess
Fuck it I sent it. I guess I'll find out if it's playful and accusatory if she responds.
Sat, 04/28/2012 - 06:59
#2
Ah sorry man meant to respond
Ah sorry man meant to respond to this lol.
It's a decent text. Gawd I remember writing a response to this my internet must have fubar'd. Only issue I see with it is the language is a bit formal. Like if you were sending this to a friend you'd say "party girl, just saw captain morgan. He was skipping up the elevator like a fruitcake!"
Yours is basically.. taking the correct components, but not putting them together very smoothly. Understand?
It's a decent text. Gawd I remember writing a response to this my internet must have fubar'd. Only issue I see with it is the language is a bit formal. Like if you were sending this to a friend you'd say "party girl, just saw captain morgan. He was skipping up the elevator like a fruitcake!"
Yours is basically.. taking the correct components, but not putting them together very smoothly. Understand?
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Sat, 04/28/2012 - 07:06
#3
I'm glad I'm getting closer.
I'm glad I'm getting closer. This is fuckin frustrating for me. This is the missing piece in my game though.
Yeah I think I get what you mean, I'll try that with the other number I got.
Yeah I think I get what you mean, I'll try that with the other number I got.